So ive been thinking about writing a song about a very difficult topic and i need help to do it, i wrote this far, thoughts? Any ideas will help
I said no
You didnt listen
All you care is your pleasure
You Break me in pieces
For some minutes of pleasure
Dont i deserve pleasure too?
Am i just a tool for you?
Used and tossed to the side
Abused, ill lose my mind
Confused, scared and scarred
Dont you see the impacts of your acts?
Are you blind to the damage you did?
What would do if i did that to you?
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First of all, it takes a lot of courage to express something so raw and deeply personal, and I commend you for being brave enough to explore it through your music. The lyrics you’ve written are powerful and honest, capturing the weight of pain and confusion in a very impactful way.
If you’re looking to expand on this, maybe consider incorporating a sense of empowerment toward the end—a shift from the darkness to reclaiming your voice. Perhaps you could write about finding strength, healing, or even demanding accountability. Sometimes, adding a message of hope or resilience can bring closure, not just for you, but for listeners who may resonate with your experience.
Overall, you’ve already created a strong emotional foundation. Keep going! It’s okay to take your time with it—music can be a form of healing. You’ve got this, and your voice deserves to be heard. With love, SG
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