Tw, sort of. just a bit of a depressing poem. today i hav

tw, sort of. just a bit of a depressing poem.

today i have decided to take a poem written by Emily Dickinson and adjust it to ring true to me :)

Original:

My life closed twice before its close;
It yet remains to see
If Immortality unveil
A third event to me,
So huge, so hopeless to conceive,
As these that twice befell.
Parting is all we know of heaven,
And all we need of hell.

"Parting" by Emily Dickinson

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Now here's my twist:

My life drew its curtains twice before its close;
It yet remains to see
If the uncertain shadows will unveil
A third event to me.
So overwhelming, so hopeless to conclude,
As these that twice took before me.
Parting is all we know that's Heaven,
But all we feel is Hell.

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Wow, this is amazing, really well written.  

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@CKBlossom thank you :slight_smile: